Feb 7, 2013

Post-it Note Poetry–The Cant of Pines

shot_1360193295858I was walking along one of the country roads that border our property – a limestone base that’s been compressed to the consistency of concrete. 

I was enjoying the cooler temperature and the audiobook of A Canticle for Leibowitz.  The road is well used and it pays to keep your wits about you.  The air was fairly still and I could hear a low murmur over the audio form my mp3.

An approaching car perhaps?  No.  As I got closer to a vacant property I realised it was the pines, seeming to whisper in a breeze I could barely feel.  And so The Cant of Pines was inspired.

 

 

The Cant of Pines

Twilight
in pink and blue.
Needles sibilate in soft wind
As I pause to learn the cant of
pines


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I remember camping along the Central Coast of NSW where pine trees grew along the river bank in large numbers and the sibilance of their leaves was haunting and melodic. Your poem brings back all kinds of great memories. And there was phosphorescence in the water so when you threw a stick in, the splash turned green for a second.
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We have lots of Pines around here. Usually to be found around the various ports and jetty's but also out in the country. I suspect that they may have been planted as a fuel source as well as for shade.

But yeah i was a little freaked by how little wind was required to set the pines talking.

The phosphorescence sounds cool B)
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