I continue to find writing Haiku endlessly fascinating. It’s a form that I can return to again and again and still find something fresh. So I am always keen to read advice on how to write Haiku.
I don’t tend to favour an overtly spiritual approach to writing the form and so Bruce Ross’ approach, which I feel does stem somewhat from this vein was initially …well not off putting, but presented a small hurdle (this is my baggage I think). The again, perhaps I am simply focussed on improving my technique and any “fluff” so to speak, how ever eloquent, poses an annoyance ( patience Sean-san).
How to Haiku doesn’t knock of its pedestal, Jane Reichhold’s Writing and Enjoying Haiku - A Hands on Guide, as my number one recommendation for new Haiku writers. I did find it offered additional insight though. So I think that its worth coming to, after you have had some experience and experimented with techniques outlined in Reichhold’s work.
In general I enjoyed Ross’ inclusion of relatively contemporary American Haiku in addition to traditional Japanese examples. I felt that this gave me a sense of where tradition has been continued ( albeit slightly altered through the change from Japanese to English) and where contemporary Haiku poets have begun to experiment or diverge.
I also enjoyed the inclusion of other forms of Japanese Poetry ie Haibun, Tanka, and Renga/Renku.
One of the things that I struggle with in reviewing poetry is the technical language with which to talk/ discuss it. Ross’ explanation/analysis of the poems he presents was aimed at a broad audience (leading some readers to criticise it as boring) which I think acts to both give the reader some pointers on how to talk about Haiku in addition to providing an explanation of the content and techniques. Better to over explain I think.
Like Reichhold I do appreciate Ross’ “Guideline” approach to the writing of Haiku. He presents the tradition, gives you examples of that tradition – contemporary and pre-modern and leaves it up to you. I think this allows for respect of the form without slavish adherence to rules that I think will ultimately restrict it and result in stagnation. His discussion on the difference between the qualities of Wabi and Sabi was also helpful.
In each of the other forms mentioned above I gained something from reading Ross’ work. I have struggled for sometime to attempt Haibun and Ross provided four different approaches and highlighted traditional and contemporary examples. His identification of the divergent traditions of Tanka were similarly illustrative. His explanation of the linking in Renga was perhaps the best I have come across.
So, a worthwhile addition to your library? I think so. Not a beginning point but certainly worth it for those with some experience/exposure to the form under their belt.
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Carolyn · 511 weeks ago
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haikutec 89p · 511 weeks ago
With the amount of physical books I have, Kindle is a very appealing choice, alongside eBooks for my MacBook Air. I like to travel with books, but I'm not a driver, so I have to be really picky.
It's another book I bought as soon as it came out, and although I like it I have rarely gone back to it, but I'll give it another try. I have tended to go back to Lee Gurga's book, as I'm not a spiritual person, or if I am, I don't seek it in my poetry as such, as far as I know. :-)
As to haibun, it's a fascinating discipline, and a little knowledge of renga or renku is useful to know because of the linking and shifting verses of that joint/group poem act in a similar fashion to linking and shifting prose and haiku together.
Despite having studied haiku for over 20 years, and in great detail, and been published widely, I still enjoy buying how to write haiku books, as I want to be an eternal student. I'm bringing my own book out next year too. :-)
Carolyn, good luck on taking your haiku further! :-) I still push myself even after all this time, as haiku is constantly evolving in Japan and R.o.W. and it's not just to keep up, but it's an unusual discipline. Why unusual? Haiku is a lifetime friend because we can never conquer it like we can with other things. We are constantly learning and being stretched.
We might think after a year or more we've cracked haiku, we can write good stuff, but there's always other horizons to walk into, and that's never frustrating, it keeps me young. :-)
warm regards,
Alan, With Words
SB Wright 110p · 511 weeks ago
I think I might have been looking at Google books where the price was almost the same as the paperback version :) . I have been trying to find Lee Gurga's work for some time as his name comes up fairly regularly in my reading.
It's good to hear that the form has sustained you for 20 years. I have subscribed to you RSS feed so I'll keep an eye out for your book.
haikutec 89p · 511 weeks ago
Enjoy!
warm regards,
Alan
SB Wright 110p · 511 weeks ago